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• Hi i was wandering if you would pay to watch this of a movie at the cinemas? I am only 14 and really want to be a screenwriter and director of films when im older, so please, if you wouldnt watch it could you just say what i could improve on, according to my school (as i made a trailer and showed it in front of 250,000 people at my school) and my family its good, but i dont know! this is just a rough plot : Theres two brothers, whos parents were both murdered when they were just babys, the brothers get sent to an orphanage in new york. they never leave eachothers sides, they live there for about 13 years until one day they were in the streets without anyone else(not many people about), when they get pushed out of the way by a sprinting man who looked scared. they look at eachother and then carry on walking like it didnt mean anything, but from around the corner came another man sprinting, but this man had a gun. he was dressed in jeans and a tank top and was wearing a black balaclava, he ran straight at the boys and was going to run straight past them, but he lifted up his gun and fired at the first running man. the brothers dived different ways while the balaclaved man fired. he shot 5 bullets and it went quiet. the brothers kept their heads down with their eyes closed for a few more second when one of them soon sat up. he called his brothers name and said are you ok? he crawls over to his brother and finds two small holes straight through his chest, he was bleeding to death, the unhurt brother starts to call out for help and trys to apply pressure but it was too late, blood is pouring out of the boys mouth as he dies next to his brother. in the next scene it is the alive boy (jake),2 weeks later sat on his brothers bed crying into his hands, he gets called down for dinner and stumbles downstairs to the dining room. he sits down with the other orphans, but soon feels alone as there is no-one sat next to him, where his brother used to sit. Jake pushes away his dinner and runs up stairs. he just stares at the ceiling and crys. One day when the owners of the orphanage are moving jakes bed and furniture .etc. into a different smaller room. Jake is moving the stuff out from under his dead brothers bed when he finds a small box, he opens it and finds a list saying : All of the stuff i want to do before i die. it was his brothers. Jake reads through it and says, i'll make you proud brother. that night Jake packed his bags and sneaked out of the orphanage. he went called out for a taxi an jumped in, he says ''anywhere but here please''. while Jake is in the taxi he seas a sign saying, 'loans'. so he says stop to the driver and hops out. he wanders into the dark building and sees a man sat there behind a desk. the man wanders what Jake is doing and asks him , jake replys that he wants a loan. the man laughs, and asks him how much for... Jake wakes up on a bench in central park, with an officer stood there, the officer goes ''you cant stay here, sorry'' he pulls jake to his feet and sends him home.Throughout the rest of the film jake does the stuf that is on the bucket list, but encounters troubles like loan sharks, and muggers/theives. he travels to places like las vegas, nevada, hollywood etc. and does amazing things... at the last scene Jake is sat in a wheelchair and is old. he mumbles up to the heavens, ''i told you i would make you proud'' ''i will see you again'' Jake he draws his last breath, and he dies a peaceful death, smiling not sad. the camera can then zoom out and shows him sat there on the edge of the grand canyon. in the end credits it can show pictures of him on his travels that he took. THE END hope you liked it and remember to only give improvements if you dont like it, and i have many other ideas aswell! THANKS

• Answer:

  There's not much that really makes it special. Many ideas seem to have been recycled. I would say that a debut of a screenwriter/director would have to be more unique.