How can you do a visual project on perception?

Does this Sound good for my hypothesis for my science project about makeup changing ur perception?

• i believe makeup does change a persons perception of themselves. makeup makes women feel confident about ourselves when we do wear makeup. some people say when they are not wearing makeup they don't think they look or feel any different to their perspectives, but it does change to other peoples perspectives. it changes the way people see them with makeup or without makeup. Girls who wear makeup feel pretty and confident, other times when your not wearing makeup they show low self-esteem. wearing makeup gives us a huge boost of confidence,and also more attractive..............................… it...:) please tell me if i need to add anything else to it.thanks

• Answer:

  i think that is very good!!!:) dont change a thing! unless you htink of anythign!