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I am having trouble forming a Thesis for my paper. Its going to be about Microsofts new car feature "SYNC"

  • I am writing about the new car feature of SYNC. I am writing about how it will start a new trend in our culture of driving and how it might and might not benfit us from driving with the new device. I'm just having trouble forming a thesis. can you help me out?

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    You can say....One of the newest technological advancements for automobiles, SYNC by Microsoft, will greatly impact the culture of driving. Undoubtly, it will greatly impact how drivers drive, and so in this paper I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages this newest form of technology will have on drivers. Its rough but its a start.

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As someone who has graded college papers in the past, I would strongly recommend focusing on just one of the SYNC features. And unless your paper is extremely long, make your thesis statement a strong positive or negative statement on the specific effect this one feature will have. SYNC advertises that, "you can sync your car, phone, music, and more." It may make for an interesting paper to focus on the "and more" part. For example: SYNC's ability to allow drivers to automatically and easily update contact information from a mobile device will increase an executive's ability to effective manage time. Or, you can go for the obvious: SYNC's ability to allow drivers to automatically and easily make hands free calls will result in fewer accidents attributed to distracted driving. Or, this might be interesting: SYNC's ability to allow drivers to automatically and easily play music from their MP3 devices will result in a decreased listening audience for radio and an increase in radio time dedicated to commercials. Have fun! The folks who developed SYNC or the marketing folks at Ford might be interested in your paper when you are done.

Carol B

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