Can anyone help me out to correct my statement letter?

Can anyone help looking over my sister SAP Appeal letter?

• Can anyone help me look over my little sister Appeal letter she writing PLEASE To Whom It May Concern, My name is and I am writing this letter to ask you to regain my financial aid. So I can continue school this spring. I am not trying to make up no type of excuses for my actions. I just was having little family problems. While I have been attending school in the fall. My family issues came between my school work and because of the issue it causes me to lack on my work. The issue came to the point that my parents would not keep my child whiles I was away at school. I would have to miss days in class and drive three hours to go back home and deal with my child and try to solve the issue with my parents. By me trying to maintain school, find a job and taking care of my child. The fact of the matter it became stressful on me and causes me to fall behind in my work. I do understand my actions and made agreement to my parents that they would take care of my child while I attend school. After I finished with school on Thursdays I will drive back home on the weekends. My changes from this problem I have gotten into is to find a tutor this semester whiles I am in Greenville and a tutor whiles I am back home, also talk to my professors during office hours if I need help with anything. So I would not fall behind in my work. My plan is to focus on my works while I am attending school and focus on my personal life outside it on the weekend I know I should not have my personal life involve in my school work. I am trying to reach my goal to finish school and be the best mother I can for my child with a good education. To show my family by having a child should not stop me from going back to school and to reach my goal I set for myself. My successful plan is to finish my education at Greenville Technical College. Transfer to USC Columbia for two years to get my bachelor degree in Human Service and become a successful Social Worker and help out others.

• Answer:

  Well I can tell you at first glance there are many grammatical errors in the letter. I have submitted an appeal as well so I will try to help. I am no English teacher by the way! Here goes! Dear_____, I am requesting an appeal to regain my financial aid so I may continue school this spring. The reason I had an unsuccessful fall semester was due to family issues. Conflicts with my parents watching my child while attending classes arose. I would have to miss days in class and drive three hours to go back home and deal with my child in order to resolve the issue with my parents. Maintaining acceptable grades, looking for a job and taking care of my child became stressful, which caused me to fall behind in my work. I do understand I am fully responsible for my actions. I made an agreement with my parents that they would take care of my child while I attend school. After I am finished with school on Thursdays, I will drive back home on the weekends. My solution to this problem I have gotten into is to find a tutor this semester while I am in Greenville and a tutor while I am back home. I will also talk to my professors during office hours if I need help with anything so I would not fall behind in my work. My plan is to focus on my education while I am attending school and focus on my personal life on the weekend. I know I should not allow my personal conflicts to interfere with my education. I am trying to reach my goal to finish school and be the best mother I can for my child by attaining a good education. I would like to show my family that having a child will not stop me from going back to school. My plan is to successfully finish my education at Greenville Technical College. Transfer to USC Columbia for two years to get my bachelor degree in Human Service and become a successful Social Worker and help out others.