How to make a French Revolution Project?

Is this poem project for school any good?

• Okki hello there. i had a history project and I made a poem about the subject we are learning about, the french revolution. I dont wana sound dumb when i presend this so tell me if you like it: The French Revolution started in 1789, It was when France was going through hard times. With two teen leaders, King Louis and Marie Antoinette, They spent all the money, the whole country was in debt. This french revolution was bloody and red, Make one mistake, and its off with your head. The country consists of three simple estates, Maybe some of you can relate. First is the clergy, who lived life as if it were easy, They werent exactly what you would call so friendly. Second came the nobility, who got the expensive things, Selfish they were, didnt care about the weaklings. Last was the third, and certainly the least, In this group were the peasants, the poor, and te bourgoise. Now lets talk about the most spendy of them yet, Ladies and gentlemen, Marie Antoinette. This young lady, only at the age of 14, Got married, and voila! theres your queen. Weirdest off all when lives were at stake, Her best responce was "Let them eat cake!" Enough about her, lets talk about him, King Louis XVI's leader skills were slim. Both Marie and King Louis realized something needed to be done, That was to have a great son. They tried for the first time, thoughts were a whirl, The first child was a little girly girl. Not yet satasfied they tried once more, At last a boy, two boys to adore. Taxes arose, 3rd estate had a run for their money, they couldnt take it no more, time to take out the clergy. No one was happy, they were downright mad, Things got nasty, things went bad. All this killing had crossed the line, Thankfully this ended in 1799. Its kinda sad when violence was the solution, Lets say goodbye to the French Revolution. *please tell me any suggestions if i need it =]

• Answer:

  Only one thing in a sentence: they couldnt=could take no more Otherwise, It is great!