What do you think of this? Its a poem...be honest but not mean!?
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I have wished for very few things in my life. And most of these wishes were purely selfish. And I think that my wishes have never been granted due to the fact of what I had mentioned above. I also now that for every star I have wished there were a million that fell to this earth. Poor things. Wishes just like prayers are very seldom to be answered if you live you life as if "heaven" doens't want me and the devil's afraid I'll take over. If there even is such a thing. Just like making wishes, I have decided to laugh down the "road less traveled'. And that could very simply mean that I make big mistakes, take bigger chances and fall even harder. But that's the only way I know how to do it. They didn't give me a manaul labeled "how to think for yourself through someone else's eyes" Well......I didn't get one anyway. So I leap without thinking about where I am going to fall. The fall can't hurt any worse then a broken heart. I can survive a broken heart but I don't think I could survive living a world that I couldn't call my own. A life that has no destination is truly my worse fear. Dreams unlike rules are not made to be broken. But dreams that you "sleep" on and the ones that you live in are not the same. Thats why I don't sleep anymore. So each night that I have been given the privelge of looking into the stars and realizing that there is something bigger then me. Bigger then us, bigger then wishes and dreams. Thats when I get comfortable with who I am as a being, as a woman, as a friend and lover. And knowing that ife is just a series of moments blending in together to make memories keeps the smiles on my face and the love in my heart.
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Answer:
poems do not have to have rhythm or even rhyme, I can't stand the uninspired who slam others' heartfelt thoughts. This is good my daughter and I both write prose, poetry and poems and she performs them, yes by all means copyright your work before you publish it anywhere and keep writing.
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it isnt a poem...it lacks rhythm...it has all the aspects of prose and lacks the aspects of poetry. and its not good.
bubbles_pop
that is a ...I cant even explan in words how pro that is!!!
supflidowg
its a good poem make sure you make it a copyright soon before anyone eles take it for them self :) *You can win alot of money for it like 1,000 or more here:
FashionFan
pretty good, though its more of a stream of consciousness than a formal poem. good feeling behind it for all that. Its got some good thinking points, maybe some more imagery needed, though the 'fall' bit is pretty good. The problem now if you want to write more 'poetry', is finding the same feeling for another work. Anyone can write one, its more that will make them great.
handszandfeet
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