Can you please help me write a poem?

Can somene please help me write this poem?

  • I have to write a poem by tomorrow. It has to be 14 lines long and it has the rhyme scheme of ABAB CDCD EFEF GG The topic I have chose to write about is my crush This is what i have so far: A - The blue of his eyes more brilliant than the sky B - His smile is brighter than the light from the moon A - No matter what what people say he's not a bad guy B - Two years of crushing makes me feel like a buffoon C - D - C - D - E - My love for him is kept hidden deep inside F - I keep my feelings locked up in my heart E - For when they're revealed I may be denied F - G - G -

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    C-I dont know what I was thinking but I made the right choice D-He never used to yell at me but now he just screams C-I realize each morning by the sound of his voice D-What is now a nightmare used to be a pleasant dream E - My love for him is kept hidden deep inside F - I keep my feelings locked up in my heart E - For when they're revealed I may be denied F- Because my love for him will come out more like a fart G- Please just go away and spare me from the shame G- I'm so glad now cuz I cant even remember his name.

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c---my heart did not know what love was d---but now it has been revealed c---but only inside where no one can see d---and only inside where only I feel f---but until then I will never know g--So until then I carry a love I can not share g--I shed tears no one can wipe

doggnation1

C- in a world that keeps on pushing me around D- i will stand my ground C- i wont back down D- hey baby, there is no easy way out.

Count Dracula

I am sorry to say I have no contribution to your poem. You have done well so far. What I must say however is what your focus is about. You want your poem to be upbeat of course but from what you say about him it should not be. While you are infatuated with him now I can tell you your future with this man will not be good. Please go back and read what you say about him. Would you like for someone else to say these things about you? Any man who expects perfection in women will be doomed to always be looking for that perfect girl. No girl is perfect because she is human. Be very careful about this. Let not your heart be broken as sure it will.

John B

A - The blue of his eyes more brilliant than the sky B - His smile is brighter than the light from the moon A - No matter what what people say he's not a bad guy B - Two years of crushing makes me feel like a buffoon C - desperately i wait to run to his arms D - but distance keep us apart C - but this extraordinary love it will never die D - anxious i prayer for you to come back E - My love for him is kept hidden deep inside F - I keep my feelings locked up in my heart E - For when they're revealed I may be denied F - G - but truly today i will speak up G - let the world know the i love you with all my heart.

franco vita

C: He glances at me and calls out Hello D: Only to turn away and walk away C: Still my heart flutters so D: And I try to keep my feelings at bay F: Yet I can not bear to be apart. G: Can I muster the courage to confess? G: Or will the words create a mess? I'm not great at poetry, but finding rhymes are always fun.

TMemories

C- I love the way he looks at me D- it makes my spirit soar C-And the only time he makes me sad D- is when I see him walk out the door G-He's so wild and he's so amazing G-If I don't get him to be mine I think I may go crazy I hope that has helped you.

phanti

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