Should economic globalization be encouraged? why or why not?

Thesis Statement about Globalization research paper...............thanks?

• Does any one can help me to come up with a thesis statement about the Globalization? My point is Globalization is good, it helps to increase economy, etc. Here are what I wrote, but my teacher said I did not state what my arguement is....... Labor and product exchanges become a prevailing way in nowadays society. Today’s globalization concept is mainly used in three areas, business, culture, and politics. America can stand in the strongest country in the world should attribute to its well globalization systems. Thanks.............

• Answer:

  Here's am INTRODUCTION sample: With current technology and advanced communication, our world is now like a nation. Labour and product exchanges have become more prevalent with modern computers and software programs to help with outsourcing to countries who can produce cheaper products in different countries who can return products at lower costs and the globalization concept has become stronger as a result in three specific areas- business, culture, and politics. America is one of the major players involved in these three areas. Some people believe that America may be influencing businesses, cultures, and politics in other countries that attribute to the global society as we currently know it; however, there are other nations who claim that America is hindering the global economy by promoting a nationalistic strategy that does not give other nations in the world a fair chance to attribute to the global economy. Now you need to finish you INTRODUCTION with a THESIS: (Now, what your teacher is looking for is what is called your thesis. In this example. I have given you two choices): Although America is said to attribute the the global economy, I disagree because evidence and research shows that the global economy could not depend on America alone. OR Although certain other nations claim that America is not the major player in attributing to the global economy, I disagree because evidence and research shows that most of the globalization systems rely on America. That's what is meant by argument. Now, you should do some research on argumentative papers and elaborate on your selected thesis in the body of your paper and then do a summary or conclusion based on what you learn in the process.