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What you'll choose? Kayaking or Money?

Hey guys how is this rap?

  • Yea girl, imma win or lose I Dont get my way,i dont get to choose Imma go hard, while you got them blues Im a game, feeling like i got clues I get drunk, i get boozed I can watch you, with my eyes glued Im a progidy, just like the sky is blue, And im at the club with nice shoes I play ball you can watch me through the side view Yea, and i rap freely Watch yo back or i'll get you with meelees My crew be wearing bandanas and beanies Im so crispy like fresh autumn tree leaves Youll be lucky to ever see me Im indestructable and i got no feelings Feeling like money so really cheery Im aint mean so dont fear me

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    a negative 20. it sucks. you rap is irrelevant, and senseless. Plus the metaphors are weak and you're forcing rhymes. I don't even know what the song signifies.

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it flows decent at the begining but it started gettin awkward to flow by the end

Too short rhymes; expand your vocabulary. Make sentences longer. "It's not just the rhymes at the end of the rap, it's also between." ;)

sick bru

Reminds me of some good old Smoke DZA. Nice man, keep working. Make a video and email it to me. [email protected]

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