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How does my Shakespearean Rap sound?

How does this Rap sound?

  • my first rap i did 2 yrs ago. Yeah im the bomb watch me exploud you are the s**t im the comode my swag is visable yours is faint my flow is more holy than the N.O. Saints I'm So focused top of my rank little ****** go hard while i go to the bank i am the door your just a knob rappings more than a hobby its just like a job my flow stole your fans i just picked your pocket when it comes to your pay im your boss so ill dock it

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    talkin that flash saying your the bomb thats what i heard last night when i was f****** your mom lil wack @ss punk need to stop with the similes now while your here give me my credentials please? your flow is holy,cause it has holes that fit it just like your mom when every dude in the neighborhood hit it your rappin ain't a job,are you gettin paid for it,NO i can tell you ain't just by your weak @ss flow my cousin can battle better than you,and that kid is 2 you say your the commode well then people sit their asses on you just kiddin,try something like that.but ok for a beginner EDIT: Cops arrested me for the 1-8-7 because i killed the beat so the dead homies can chill in Heaven So i suppose,Hermes here works at Quiznos but it's not my business what he does after hours or who he blows but i do know that Hermes got that cold sore from Herpes Because he drank from a Gay man's Slurpee Hermes i noticed your avatar it seems your wearing a fedora well when you move to Mexico and become a trans I'll call you Senora You say I'm in that Mini Coop well your in a toy battery Cadillac that's as far as you'll get to acting like your sellin crack,or puttin up stacks Hermes your rhymes are wack,I'm bettin 10 bucks your livin in a shack Well that's bad because that must be 10 bucks you don't own i bet you wear cardboard for shirts,and your imaginary fedora is a cone now this is where you blowin guys comes into play wow this song is starting to sound like NWA You lost your Job at quiznos because you stole all the subs and then shot out the building with some random fake thugs now you are addicted to Drugs,doin lines of coke and sleeping on bug infested rugs Blowin guys for 10 cents,so you can just get that next hit don't get mad at me Hermes because your the one who said it

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isnt "you are the ****" usually a complement? its pretty decent for your first one

For your first i think its good, but you need to use muilties, punches, and work on more rhyming because you do have some good ones there like the N.O. Saints one, and the Door Knob one as well, but work on new ones like those because the rest every one has heard before. Just remember anything is possible with hard work and dedication. Don't listen to that Truffle Shuffle he's a fag, Matter of fact he is the Muffle in my Duffel bag, he's just wants to rag on you, because i won't ejaculate in his soup And he can't calculate that were Bentlee's and he's a mini coup And if he's going to rhyme then he should learn how to shoot cuz i ain't got time, for someone who just whines, in only 10 lines I do 10 lines of cocaine get shot by a nine and shoot up Novocaine Even though i didn't feel pain, but i'm also completely insane with acid rain But its not that great when you get blame for the fate of people faking the game Every one who deals Mary Jane, will know my name because we feel the same And i just put more flame in these 11 lines then lil wayne and his whole fame life

Not bad for your first rap & don't listin to that *** wipe who was talking about your mom.....

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