Can someone tell me what this song is called please it goes like this?

Dedicated this song to someone that i really like so could anyone help me with this? maybe correct it as well?

• Okay so what i did was hear this new song by Jarivs called "Baby" and to be honest it really hit me hard inside i just instantly liked it. so what i did next was try to modify his lyric by printing off the lyrics off the computer. when i mean modify i mean to say instead of using his words i plug in words of mine and at the same time try to match the syllables used in his diffrent lines with the ones i made up. The main reason why i did this was because at the time i heard this song i was thiniking of this girl that i became really attracted to during the school year so as i was "rewriting" this song she was the only thing in my mind...iight now hear it goes I remember the day when i saw ya you were sittin in class talkin to your friend i was like man i wish i could be with that i was just a little nervous didnt think that you would notice realized that u were with someone really wished it were to be me your gettin real hard to talk to your someone i want to be close to just wish u could understand that i always keep you close never have i felt like this for a girl beofore dont wanna say i like you want you to know that i love you Babyyyyyy. i need you to be my baby i wish that you could be my baby( tell me do u like me) Ladyyyy. i need you to be my lady just wish that u could be my lady but your not into me I remember the day when u told me that i wasnt your type really felt so messed up, to even talk to you should i have left you alone tell me wat i should have done never have i felt so scared to even go and chat with you said your gettin real hard to talk to your someone i want to be close to [just] wish u could understand that i always keep you close dont wanna pressure you into likin me i wanna say i miss you [just] wish i could hold and kiss you Babyyyy. i need you to my baby i wish that you could be my baby (tell me do you like me) Ladyyyy. one day you could be my lady just wish that you could be my lady but your not into me feels like a dream of love hard to hold in this love baby trust when i say i would be with you every single day and the memory of your face really takes my breath away and im writing this today cause i wanna be with u somedayyyyy.. iight so this is wat i got [ oh yea i am not tryna pladgerise trust me just tryna have a little fun with my creativity ] may be hard to go along with tha music but i tried my best to fit the syallabels correctly. if it sucks than please give me advice on how to make it better or even correct some things...THANKS! heres tha link to Jarvis's new song try to go along with it while readin my lyrics try not to pay alot to attention to his but more to mine. http://www.imeem.com/jamz83/music/e01cwK0v/jarvis-baby/ or youtube (Jarvis- Baby)

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  awwww thats so sweet... lol girls love it when you write them songs.... its sounds like your in a tough situation there buddy.... yeah ii loved it.... alot but the chores is kinda.... well... corny :(.... but i really like everything else.... ooh can you email the finishing product to me ide love to hear how it turned out... [email protected]