How do you view clouds?

What do you think of my song about clouds?

• The feedback I'm getting is that it's really good. What do you think? Part 1: My song about Clouds Clouds, so high up In the sky What are you doing up there What are you doing? The clouds in the sky are gathering As the upcoming storm is brawn Hide underneath my umbrella We can hide; the clouds in view Part 2: The Storm The storm was ferocious I lost my umbrella Along the sky, the clouds were intense With grey colour I found my umbrella the next day On the hill underneath the clouds The rain had destroyed it The clouds will pay Part 3: My Revenge. The clouds stood along the skyline Looking down on me I found the will to move My finger, as I pulled the trigger The bullet hung in the air like a flash of light and slowly tread across the target Part 4: Knowing when to give up I threw away the gun And headed back home The clouds still Hung over my head It rained In defeat I held my hand out Across my face And cried in helplessness Part 5: A resolution Today I went outside And was greeted by the clouds They were white, and happy I felt happy too I went to the park And sat on the bench Underneath the clouds I ate my lunch happily

• Answer:

  song is nice you should also include a guitar solo means an acoustic solo somewhere in between the song. Then it would be much better.