Do you have some advice on bruising behind the knees?

So, i just wrote this little song called hands and knees! advice?

• so tell me what you think of this song, i'm a girl btw. uh this will most likely be alternative. it's called "hands and knees" is it good? bad? deep? cliche? etc.? 1-10? thanks :) ______________________________________… I ask myself if I give you my words Will you spit them back like it hurts. And I don't want them to, I don’t them to. But my mouth is free, My mind is hidden in memories. But I don't want to see, I don't want to see. Life gets complicated. I'll learn as I go. Hopefully I'll end up somewhere. Where, i don't know. But for now i guess I'll learn what you know. So now I promised myself that I'll make something of myself. These hands that I eat at I beg, give me chances please I beg on my knees, Its what I need Life gets complicated. I'll learn as I go. Hopefully I end up somewhere. Where, I don't know. But for now I guess I'll learn what you know. Have faith in me Because I've lost it in familiar humanity I'm on my hands and knees. Have faith in me. Hopefully I'll end up somewhere. But I'm on my hands and knees. Have faith in me. Have faith in me. Have faith in me.

• Answer:

  hey its Paladin aka pal, you just commented on my short bust of lyrics on my rap song... (thank you btw) and so im returning the favore.. Life gets complicated. I'll learn as I go. Hopefully I'll end up somewhere. Where, i don't know Above: thats really a great verse... and my only complain is not being able to hear it as a whole.. its hard to know if the sylibles will flow, but as it is now i enjoyed it a lot... Add me as a freind and well keep in touch... and idk why you told me you were a girl... haha im a guy... Good Job "Pal"