Help with resume "objective?

Resume Objective Help PLEASE!?

• Is this objective grammatically correct? As a sculptor & 2/3-D artist, does the objective look good? I am looking for a 3-D work in the game & film industry where I can also make sculptures (foam/real) for the movie/game set, hence I specified that looking to do sculpture & graphics for game & movie industry. Any suggestion as to how better to improve in your opinions would be so appreciated assuming if the objective needs to be altered in some ways. THANK YOU "A position as 2-D & 3-D modeler & sculptor for film or game industry where utilization of professional artistic skills will contribute to the company’s growth" Need help with inserting 'a' wherever necessary

• Answer:

  As owner of an editing and writing service specializing in resumes, CV's and cover letters, I always advise my clients to leave out Objective and use Profile instead. Here is what I would write for you: Profile: With over () years of experience as a sculptor and 3-D artist, my exceptional skills and background enhances any company I work for. Along with sculpting and 3-D artistry, I am also skilled at (insert here) and hope to expand my knowledge on the movie industry and bring all of my experience to enhance your business. If you need more help, check out my website or e-mail me directly at: klwediting@gmailcom.