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• i have been applying for jobs for the last 3 months and i have not been called for an interview, so i am guessing its because of my resume, can anyone please give me some advice please. this is my resume though i changed the companies that i worked for, and the name of the cities. Skills ______________________________________… Languages ? HTML ? JAVA Operating Systems ? Microsoft windows 98-2000-xp-vista-7 ? Linux ? Mac os Software ? Software Adobe Photoshop ? Adobe Illustrator ? Macromedia Freehand ? Adobe Premier ? Microsoft office suite Database ? Database Access ? Microsoft Excel Language spoken ? English ? Spanish OBJECTIVE ______________________________________… To utilize my interpersonal and technical skills in a networking or IT position on a long-term career growth. Education ______________________________________… Computer Science, Bachelor of Science In progress some State University, savanna, Georgia Focused on object-oriented design Adobe Photoshop Certification Adobe Illustrator Certification Experience ______________________________________… Tech july 2007 - present company, savanna, Georgia ? Resulting in numerous raises and promotions ? Trained new and existing sale staff in on selling strategies, and product knowledge ? Set up new technologies ? Diagnosed and repaired personal computers leading to a lot of experience with data lost, malware, network and hardware troubleshot. Brothers Cafe Columbus, Georgia ? Fixed and maintained a network consisting of 15 computers network July 2011 ? Oc tuber 2011 Miami, Florida ? Maintained 2800 cisco routers and 2950 switches in the automobile industry ? Diagnosed and repaired the dealer computers ? Created server access accounts for the dealer representatives ? Worked with windows server 2003 and 2008

• Answer:

  It's obvious you are very smart but it's also obvious that you are not English major. The short answer to your question is nothing and everything. While it might technically be a good resume; your objective sentence does not make grammatical sense if you say it out loud to yourself and it should come first- this is your topic sentence if you remember that from grade school. The languages section might need to be abbreviated and relocated. You use upper case letters where they don't belong and lower case where they do. Your resume reflects the pride you take in yourself and your work so potential employers see these tiny errors and file your resume in the circular file. In this economy you cannot risk that. While you want to show all of your skills you don't want it to sound like you just printed them out from some computer database either. I am not sure what all of the ?'s are about either. You want to keep every item in the same format for example; Company Name, dates employed, Job Title, Upper case letters where they belong on each one. Another words, don't capitalize July in one entry and then use lower case on (september) in the next entry. Keep them all the same. I would also use dates for all of your school and work experience as well as degrees you earned or are working towards with the # of credits earned and GPA if it is fairly high and all job titles. My son works in law enforcement and has a color photo of the departments badge on each internship and job he has held. It makes the resume very impressive looking. Maybe you can think of something similar that will show off your computer skills without ruining the integrity of hte resume? You may also want to add a line about references; “ References available on request” or something similar. If you want me to review it fix it up and email it to me [email protected] Good Luck