Can someone help me with my resume please?
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Hey there, I'm attending a media fair in NY this Monday and the worker at school never got back to me on the changes I made to my resume. Feel free to make any comments, positive or negative, since I'm trying to make this as best as possible. It looks a little strange because it didn't convert over well from Microsoft word but I'm putting a link to Google Docs if you'd like to see it more clearly. I also took out my personal info at the top but it will be there when I present my resume. Thanks. https://docs.google.com/document/d/14THnDgZOmUsiA2Ef7cvdj7uUxJv4HY-J7vliUZv0iZA/edit David Objective To obtain an internship or part time position at a local media outlet where I can apply my writing and reporting skills. Education Brooklyn College, CUNY, Brooklyn, NY 2011-Present Bachelor of Arts in Journalism City College, CUNY, Harlem, NY 2009-2011 Media/Writing Experience Writer for High School Newspaper 2008-2009 Voc Voice, Queens Vocational and Technical High School Covered school budget, sports, and student scheduling issues for quarterly school publication Writer for Brooklyn College Newspaper The Excelsior Pitch ideas and respond promptly to assignments Able to meet weekly deadlines Internships ItesCommunications, Brooklyn, NY Technical Assistant October 2008-December 2008 Utilized excellent hands-on skills involving precision on circuit boards and wires Assisted in installation and reparation of taxicab radios Communicated frequently with customers to identify problem with radio Skills Bilingual. Speaks fluent Spanish and English Proficient in Microsoft Office (Excel, Word, Outlook, PowerPoint) Familiar with Windows and Macintosh OS X Operating systems Professional Affiliations • National Association of Hispanic Journalists
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Answer:
get rid of the objective part, ppl dont do that anymore. Also make sure you're using the same tense for the things you did at the job. Like the first job, you have "covered" school budget, and the next job you have "pitch", it should be "pitched." These are all jobs you used to have, so make sure you're using the same past tense.
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