Can someone grade my sat essay?

I was wondering what grade I would get on my SAT essay will someone grade it?

• Prompt 1 Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below. The pressures to conform in a modern free society are not as drastic as they were in the past, when failure to conform meant imprisonment or worse. Such influences are, however, more dangerous because they are hard to detect. These are the pressures to live like our neighbors, to think like our community, to reshape ourselves in the image of someone else. The appeal of belonging to a group is attractive, but doesn't such conformity destroy our individuality? Adapted from Eleanor Roosevelt, You Learn By Living Assignment: Is it always harmful for an individual to think and live as other people do? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations. Great ideas is not something people are born with but something that does not always go with modern day ideas. Conformity destroys the individuality of humanity. It would not allow free thinkers such as Albert Einstein, and Lady Gaga to become their true selves. Conformity is always harmful because it does not allow free thinking. Albert Einstein was one of the smartest people to ever live because he did not always reshape his ideas to modern day society standards. If Albert had conformed to societies standards some of his greatest theories would not exist. Today in modern times it is "more dangerous " to not conform because society ideas conflict. Lady Gaga who inspires kids to dream does not fit the modern day ideas. Our communities try to stop her because of her wild dressing, and crazy songs. Our society would lose some of its greatest thinkers and inspires because they do not conform to society. Society needs free thinkers to further its progress. If people always conformed with society the earth would be the center of the universe and it also be flat. Christopher Columbus would have never sailed to America and Ben Franklin would have never invented the lighting bulb. We would be stuck in the dark ages without progressive thinkers. Conformity is always harmful because it does not allow individuals to dream.

• Answer:

  The cynical idiot who gave you a C-plus is wrong. You do have a few errors, but your ideas were clearly expressed. You offered reasonable examples and showed why conformity is harmful: "It does not allow individuals to dream." I think you got a 7 or an 8. It depends, though.