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How do you make a poem?

I wrote this poem for my girlfriend. How can I change the last four lines to make them rhyme?

  • I don't know what I'd do without you, I'm not sure where I would be. You make me smile, you make me laugh, You make me a better me. Through the good times and the bad, The smiles and the tears. We will always be together, I will always hold you near. I may not be the best at expressing how I feel, I am writing this from my heart, These feelings are really real. You're the missing piece to my puzzle, I wouldn't trade you for a thing. I'll love you forever and always, Babe you are my world. I would like to change the last four lines a little bit to make them rhyme with the same pattern as the rest. I want to keep the same meaning in there, such as "You are the missing piece to my puzzle." Any ideas?

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    without you my puzzle would be incomplete I wouldn't trade you for anything 'cause you're the reason my heart decides to beat? idkk :]

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You're going to have issues rhyming with puzzle. Maybe if you switched the lines "I wouldn't trade you for a thing" and the one you mentioned about a puzzle in order to make it easier to rhyme... If you did it could go something like I wouldn't trade you for a thing You're the missing piece to my puzzle Check out my awesome bling ... I'm not going to write it, but hopefully I helped.

King of Hearts 4

even though it doesnt rhyme its beautiful maybe change "babe" to darling girls like that or dear or love and you can change world to something like life it doesnt rhyme but sounds good

Samantha

your poem is really beautiful i wouldn't trade your eyes for nothing I'll have your love in my heart forever babe you are my hole world

zeynab

You're the missing piece I need The one I've longed to see That's all I got ;)

Ashley

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