For my UC personal statement should I what should I write about?

For UC Personal Statement Prompt 2, is it okay to write about Modeling/Role modeling for others?

• Well here is alittle about me, Im 17, and ive been in the modeling industry sense I was 13. I feel modeling has been a big part of my life and has impacted me in so many ways outside of the superficial part everyone assumes. Ive taken the cocept of modeling much more in depth than the defination it has. Im a very unselfish person and love to deticate time to my parrish and serve my community. I admire the idea of inspiring others through my talent and skill, and persaverance to overcome the challenges and obsticles ive faced as a young lady. Im also Pro on feminist movements and perspire to be a woman other women can look upto. I plan to attend a unviersity as a Business administration major. Would this be a good cocept for as my UC personal statement prompt 2? (Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud, and how does it relate to the person you are?)

• Answer:

  No