Can anyone help me out to correct my statement letter?

Can anyone help me out to correct my statement letter?. i truly appreciate. GOD BLESS YOU?

• Dear: To whom it may concern at the Appeals Board, My name is …………and my SSN# is……… and my case # is ……… I would like to protest for (re)) redetermination and request for hearing appeal. I have been through a lot of struggling in my life and this my personal statement I am not blaming lacks company or the UIA. I have lived in Kent county Michigan for thirteen years, I have worked for …..company from 8/8/98 to 8/8/10 my job was part of my life, I was a very hard working employee and I have always been on time to make sure that am there when am needed. I never wanted to quit …..company my dream plan was to work for …… company until I retire, but unfortunately it didn’t happen the way I always wanted. I really appreciated and loved working for ……….company is like I can’t miss even one day I really didn’t like the way it ended. Relocating my family it was very important for me and my family, Due to my situation I am married with five beautiful children with my wife. In 2001 me and my wife we’ve been separated, since then I have really missed my family, and in June 2010 my wife and my kids they move to CA. I became so sick. Depression, anxiety and stressed-out. I have tried to talk to my wife if we can get back together after a long negotiations she finally accepted me back. I have even tried to make her move back to MI. but for some reason she disagreed about moving back to MI. so on Aug/2010 i gave my Company ……. a two weeks notice that I am voluntary quitting on 8/8/2010 but I did not state my personal reason. So I moved on aug/2010 as soon as possible I started looking for a job to work. I never thought or remembered about applying for an unemployment and I never collected unemployment for getting fired, quitting or permanent lay off. Because I have been always independent working and very hard working person for thirteen years I don’t like to depend on someone else. But this time I am going through a lot of difficulties. To enable marital status and family reconciliation, I resigned my job in Michigan on ( 08/08/10 ) and rejoined my family in California. Having looked for work unsupported for 12 weeks, and on the advice of a qualified case worker told me to apply for unemployment, I applied for unemployment benefits .My application has been denied. Can the Appeals Board rule on the applicability of any part of the leglislation concerned allowing for compassionate grounds? I am actively seeking work, I continue to look for work, I have applied on monster.com, nbty.com, kellyservicess.com, randstad.com, shimano.com, I am looking and applied at the job's classifieds, I am trying hard the best I can to seek employment to be with my family but is just down on my luck trying to find employment. I (……….) acknowledge that all the information provided on this document is accurate and true representation. To the best of my knowledge. Sincerely. ______________ Sign.

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  To whom it may concern: My name is …………and my SSN# is……… and my case # is ……… I would like to request a hearing appeal. I have been through a lot of struggles in my life and this is my personal statement. I have lived in Kent county Michigan for thirteen years. I have worked for …..company for twelve years. My job was part of my life. I was a very hard working employee and I have always been on time. I never wanted to quit. My dream was to work for …… company until I retired, but unfortunately it did not happen that way. I am married with five beautiful children. My family's relocation was a very important decision. In 2001, my wife and I separated. I have really missed my family. In June 2010, my wife and kids moved to California. I became sick with depression, anxiety, and stress. After many days of pleading with my wife, she finally accepted me back. I offered to pay for her to move back to Michigan. She does not wish to leave California. Sadly, in August of 2010 I gave my Company ……. a two weeks notice. I informed them that my last day would be August 8th, 2010. I did not give them my reasons. I moved to California in August of 2010 and began looking for work. It did not occur to me that I could apply for unemployment benefits. I have never collected unemployment because I was fired or because I quit or because of a permanent lay off. I have always been independent and a very hard working person. I don’t like to depend on someone else. Now, I am going through a lot of difficulties. I have been looking for work, unsupported, for 12 weeks. A qualified case worker advised me to apply for unemployment. I followed their advice and applied for unemployment benefits. My application was denied. I ask in all humbleness for the Appeal's Board to reconsider my case in light of any new legislation that may have been overlooked in my first filing. I am actively seeking work. I have applied at numerous online agencies such as Monster, nbty, Kelly Services, Randstad, and Shimano. I have responded to many classified advertisements and I continue looking each day. I am trying hard to gain employment. I strongly desire to again be with my family, but I have been unsuccessful. Please reconsider my application for unemployment benefits. I thank you and my family thanks you. I (……….) acknowledge that all the information provided on this document is an accurate and true representation. To the best of my knowledge.