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How do i reword this sentence?

  • How do I reword this sentence my teacher doesn't allow me to use the word it. How can i reword it (no pun intended) so i leave it (once again no pun intended) out? Also is it (pun intended) a run on? "It scares me to think that my sins may follow me to my grave on which a black flower will sprout marking my sins that were never released from my miserable soul."

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    Easy; she's trying to show you how it changes from passive to active (it was done; I did it). Take the "it" out and put "I" phrases instead. "I am scared to think that my sins may follow me to my grave, on which a black flower will sprout, marking the sins that were never released from my miserable soul." And yes, the original sentence was a run-on. It's not a run-on the way I wrote it, just a little long, since I wasn't sure how much you were allowed to change it.

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How frightening to think that.........................! My fear is that my sins.............................. The idea that my sins....................miserable soul fills me with dread.

Learner

use the word "This" -or- open with " Scary to think that . . ."

chesewizz

use the word "This" -or- open with " Scary to think that . . ."

chesewizz

How frightening to think that.........................! My fear is that my sins.............................. The idea that my sins....................miserable soul fills me with dread.

Learner

Easy; she's trying to show you how it changes from passive to active (it was done; I did it). Take the "it" out and put "I" phrases instead. "I am scared to think that my sins may follow me to my grave, on which a black flower will sprout, marking the sins that were never released from my miserable soul." And yes, the original sentence was a run-on. It's not a run-on the way I wrote it, just a little long, since I wasn't sure how much you were allowed to change it.

ArtLover

1.scary to think that my sins may............. 2.so scary to me to think that my sins may........... 3.I'm scared to think that my sins may............. OR: A black flower sprouts marking those sins that were never released within my miserable soul. Scary to think my sins may follow me to my grave. And yes I do think its a run on GOOD LUCK!!!!!!!!

Angie

The mere thought of death brings fear to myself. Realising that my sins may follow me to the grave, is like a black flower that will sprout, marking my sins, that were never realised from my dreadful soul.

MiSs. Academia

A terrifying thought: my sins may follow me to my grave--my grave on which a black flower will sprout, signifying the sins that live on in my miserable soul.

Dear Carlos

My personal fear is that my sins will follow me passed death. I envision a black rose sprouting from my grave marking the burden of sin that torments my shackled soul.

hippychic13

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