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A Farewell to Arms thesis statement?

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    Its hard to help with a thesis statement when I haven't read the whole paper. It would be like you asking me to tell you the theme of a story, but not letting me read it. That being said - it IS actually easier to try to focus on the theme of your whole story. Since it sounds like a personal expository essay, your thesis statement should reflect your essay and opinion as a whole. Something along the lines of: Allowing my brother's weakness to overcome my trust made A, B, and C happen. A good thesis statement states the point (you regret allowing him back in) with your main ideas (A, B, C: these i don't know). You don't want to outright say your main ideas, however. Write them in a different way than you do in your body paragraphs. Now, you may want actually state your thesis statement at the end of your essay, since this sounds like a personal kind of expository piece. In that case, your thesis should show how letting your brother back in and trusting him changed you in the end. I hope this helps, as I said, its hard to give a good thesis statement when I don't know your main ideas for the body paragraphs.

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MY ONLY REGRET IS REACHING OUT TO HELP THE ONES I LOVE WITHOUT BEING ABLE TO PROVIDE THE NECESSARY SUPPORT. MY BIGGEST REGRET IS OPENING UP MY HEART TO MY BROTHER, TRUSTING HIM, AND SUPPORTING HIM, WITH REALIZING DRUGS HAD CONSUMED EVERY PART OF HIM I KNEW.

Its hard to help with a thesis statement when I haven't read the whole paper. It would be like you asking me to tell you the theme of a story, but not letting me read it. That being said - it IS actually easier to try to focus on the theme of your whole story. Since it sounds like a personal expository essay, your thesis statement should reflect your essay and opinion as a whole. Something along the lines of: Allowing my brother's weakness to overcome my trust made A, B, and C happen. A good thesis statement states the point (you regret allowing him back in) with your main ideas (A, B, C: these i don't know). You don't want to outright say your main ideas, however. Write them in a different way than you do in your body paragraphs. Now, you may want actually state your thesis statement at the end of your essay, since this sounds like a personal kind of expository piece. In that case, your thesis should show how letting your brother back in and trusting him changed you in the end. I hope this helps, as I said, its hard to give a good thesis statement when I don't know your main ideas for the body paragraphs.

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MY ONLY REGRET IS REACHING OUT TO HELP THE ONES I LOVE WITHOUT BEING ABLE TO PROVIDE THE NECESSARY SUPPORT. MY BIGGEST REGRET IS OPENING UP MY HEART TO MY BROTHER, TRUSTING HIM, AND SUPPORTING HIM, WITH REALIZING DRUGS HAD CONSUMED EVERY PART OF HIM I KNEW.

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