Can you help me find a high school scholarship?

Can you peer edit and help me make a conclusion for my scholarship essay?

• Be as critical and knit picky as possible. I really want this scholarship I also dont know how to write it because the only rules they gave me were ~atleast one page double spaced ~describe you educational and career goals ~describe involvment in campus clubs and activities ~describe community service invovment It has taken me my whole life of understanding who I am to decide what I am going to be as an adult, but I have finally decided. First, I am going to (insert community college) to complete my first two years of my degree. Then, I will transfer to (insert University) to obtain my Bachelors Degree. Growing up, I was trying to get a better grasp on my interests and hobbies so I could find a career suitable for me, then slowly, I came to realize what I wanted to dedicate my life to. What I wanted to be stood right in front of me for thirteen years. I am going to be a teacher. I want to be a teacher because I look up to them, admiring their work every day. Every teacher I have ever known has been special to me in their own way. Whether a role-model, an arch-nemesis, an influence, my worst nightmare, or an idol, every single one of them have been an inspiration to me. Not only have they helped me with school subjects, but they have also helped shape me into the person I am today. If it were not for them I would not be in school. Throughout my years in high school, I have been in many clubs that have made an impact on who I am today. I have been in Teen Institute for four years, which has taught me to stay above the influence. People Incorporated, a club that I have been in for two years, has made me want to help the people in my community by donating blood or helping set up for the blood drive. I have also been in Young Life which has helped me make more friends, treat everyone equally, and get a better understanding of religion. Lastly, I have been a member of the (insert school) Choir for seven years. It has taught me that music really can spark inspiration. Over the past few summers I have been deeply involved with community services and activities. Not only have I done landscaping and gardening, but I was also a Community Holiday Event Organizer in the town of (inserts town). My community services also include working at a wine vineyard in (inserts city) and caring for horses. The community services have not only helped me improve my social skills, but also improved my working habits and showed that I am a hard worker. CONCLUSION?? ?????

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  REPEAT OFFENDER This user is just wasting our time with complex questions that are not real homework questions.