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What do you think of my Personal Website? I am a 14 year old who has created this personal website and would like to know what you think of my website? So please give me your responses. Website: http://www.adnanchowdhury.co.nr

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    Completely unvarnished feedback: - From a presentation standpoint, it looks quite professional. Good work. The photo is poor though -- all that white space in the corner behind your head makes your head look geometrically strange. - The subtitle "Adnan - One name. One legend." is pretentious. If you're going to be pretentious, be funny at least. It's not funny. - No theme: the theme right now is just "I made a web site". It's all about you trying to find something to say. That's backwards: the best way to do this is to first have something to say, then put up a web site to say it. Otherwise, you have a solution in search of a problem. So I would recommend finding some *specific* topic or topics that you care about and focusing the site on those topics, rather than focusing the site on yourself personally. Everybody is interested in themselves -- if you go to a party worried about how you look, you needn't worry: nobody cares. They're all worried about how *they* look. What you want is to distract everyone from this obsessive self-interest by saying something interesting.

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More feedback -- and maybe some varnish, as well: 1. What HasntBeen has already said. 2. You've chosen to set up the site in English, and ... it doesn't look like English is your first language. If that's the case, then congratulations on how well you speak your second language; you have me beat. But since you chose English, you need to work on improving that. Some of the text that gives you away: "Through out" - we say this as one word: "Throughout" "the world of internet" - "the Internet" "could come useful to you" - "you might find useful" "do take you time" - "take your time" "via contacting me (please look in contact page for further information)" - "." (If people don't already know that the "get in touch" link means "email" -- it's not labeled as "contact page" -- then the feedback won't be very useful anyway, will it? So replace ALL those words with ... a period. the word "switcing" -- and what's boring about Alt-Tab? "much more better" -- "much better" or just "better" 3. It's not the white space in the photo that's the problem. It's the fact that it was taken with a webcam with the corner of the room making up the background, and the parallax (because it's a webcam with fixed focus and a wide angle lens) adding the distortion. Get a better photo, taken with a real camera. Smile. 4. NEVER plagiarize. Those "wise words" were not authored by Adnan Chowdhury. Problems of style, spelling and grammar can be overlooked. If you pretend ownership of that which isn't yours, then that's a character defect that cannot and will not be overlooked.

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