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Essay question has too many permutations or am I overthinking this?

  • For my son’s high school history class, he has been assigned an in-class argument/opinion essay. The teacher ended most of the lecturing this week and has given them time to prepare thesis statements for the essays. Here is where it starts to get complicated (at least to my son and me): What I want to know: * What are the useful variable permutations of questions numbers 2 & 3 as explained below? * Does this essay assignment seem a bit unreasonable? There will be three possible questions for the essay. The students have been given all three to prepare. The teacher will pick one of these at random on the day of the essay: 1. Describe the extent and impact of new trading systems as they develop during this time period. 2. How do belief systems (Buddhism, Confucianism, Dao, Legalism, Christianity, Zoroastrianism) compare and what is the impact they had on their respective societies? 3. In the following areas explain the political development: Han China, South Asia, Greece, Rome, Persia and Mesoamerica. The instructions are: * 10 factual items of historical significance on the topic * At least 3 specific analytical statements (commentary) addressing the thesis, to prove their opinion * If question 2 or 3 is chosen on the day of the essay, the teacher will then pick at random two of the categories for that question. So for example, on the day of the essay the question may be “How do Christianity and Confucianism compare…” or “In Han China and Greece explain the political development”. Of course, it could be any two out of the list for each question. My son’s is finding it difficult to prepare for the last two, as the variables are unknown until the day of the essay. In preparation, he is trying to formulate multiple thesis statements for each possible variable combination and come up with ten factual items that meaningfully correlate to those combined variables, as well as come up with three meaningful statements that support his thesis for each variable set. And then all of this needs to make a compelling argument. I agree with him that it seems like a very difficult essay to prepare for. In his exasperation, he said it would take a mathematician to calculate are the variable combinations of (2x) variables + (10x) facts + (3x) commentary statements. I sat down and tried to figure it out, but I don’t math enough, so I think my formula of [n!/(n-r)! ] was wrong. Again, my two questions: What are the useful variable permutations of questions numbers 2 & 3 as explained below? Does this essay assignment seem a bit unreasonable?

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    Depends, is it regular old World History, or is it AP World History. Frankly, it's a delicious assignment and one that requires not just facts but critical thinking and rhetoric. EXCELLENT! Don't freak out. Many teachers have a high bar, but will grade appropriately for the exam. Now, I'm assuming this is open book open note, so you and your son should review his notes and organize them so that he can easily get to the nuggets he needs. For example, each of the religions should have some bullet points about the religion (date it started, general political culture during the time, tenants of the religion.) Therefore its pretty easy to compare and contract any of them, because those concepts line up pretty easily. Ditto for the political development question. Of course the notes will hit the key points, and the text should provide a framework. Better to work on the outline of the essay, and then just fill in the blanks on test day: Introduction: A few sentences that restate the question, and offer the thesis. Sections Timeframe of the event Geography/location of the event External pressures (Political, religious, weather) Internal pressures (Taxation, Ruler, Political situation) Important/influential figures Conclusion That makes it easy to organize the essay, and to plug in the relevant information. Also talk it through with your son and see what conclusions, if any he has drawn about these topics. Often talking it through helps someone formulate their opinions and understanding of the subject. This sounds like a great class! Have fun with it!

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To me, this sounds pretty clearly designed so that students _can't_ memorize answers for every permutation in advance. Rather, they should study the basic facts and work to understand the style of argumentation & critical thinking needed to connect them on the fly. While this may or may not be typical of testing in secondary school these days, in my experience as a university instructor it _is_ typical of post-high-school education so I'm glad to see it happens sometimes before that.

advil

The assignment seems reasonable to me. What seems weird to me is this level of parent involvement in homework for a high school level student, especially one at the AP level.

seesom

I agree with others that this sounds completely reasonable and like a great assignment. Why is he trying to pre-write everything? He should be working on making sure he understands each belief system well, and understands each region's political development -- say half a dozen good facts (plus the like theoretical basis) for each one. For practice I would maybe pick two at random and practice the process of figuring out how to compare them (maybe spending 5-10 minutes to come up with a sketched out outline). But if he's trying to pre-write each possible essay then I think that's entirely the wrong strategy.

brainmouse

My quick take on this would be to focus on memorizing decent summaries of each individual belief system and region and not worry so much about pre-planning my comparisons between them, but then again I usually test well and tend to be good at ad libbing that stuff. For instance, rather then prepare every possible combo for question 3 I'd just review whatever we went over in lecture about each region, and then pick a few categories to remember to include in my comparison. Say, how did the system regard the rights of the individual, or how was the government/leader chosen, or was slavery a part of the system. If there's a textbook with a chapter on each region or belief system I bet each chapter has common section headings, that could be a place to start. It is probably worth clarifying with the teacher whether noting in the essay that society X was a monarchy while society Z was a direct democracy counts as one historically significant factual item or two. As to your broader question of whether this is a reasonable essay prompt, I'd say it's typical of high school essay prompts in that actually answering the question as asked is impossible without writing a PhD-length dissertation, but there's an expectation that what the students will produce will neccessarily be an oversimplification focused on regurgitating what they learned in class or in the readings. Not saying it's the best way to teach, but it is what it is. I actually like that the student is expected to compare and contrast, at least there's room for some actual critical analysis in there.

Wretch729

"There seems to be some assumptions, maybe from the pertinent posters' own childhood experience, that I am some sort of helicopter parent who won't let his son fend for himself." Um, no....I got the impression that you are overly involved from the way you framed this question and from the tags you used "pointless excercises in authority and control". Sorry. Good luck to your kid!

travelwithcats

I think your son is getting freaked out because there is the theoretical possibility that he could prepare an outline for every possible essay, by investing an unreasonable amount of hours into preparing for the exam. Of course, that is almost certainly not what the teacher has intended here. The idea is to give them a broad enough set of options that students do not actually prepare essays ahead of time but rather study the appropriate materials (belief systems, political development, trading systems) and think about how they would compare, and then come up with the actual essay on the day of the exam. I agree with some posters above that the correct strategy is to know each subject area well and outline one or two of the possible comparisons so that you get some practice with it. This is both good preparation for the AP exam and for college essay tests, which often have this feature of "Here's a set of questions you could be asked, I'll pick some number to actually test you on the day of." There too, the idea is not to prewrite every single possible essay but to use the possible questions to guide your studying. So, it's good to get used to this model now and get some of the stress out before encountering it in college. I'm curious why your son is more stressed by this particular assignment than he would be by an essay exam with the following instructions: "There will be an essay exam covering the material on belief systems, political development, and trading systems." Surely he's had that sort of test before?? It sounds like the teacher is actually trying to do them a favor by giving more structure and guidance about what she expects. I don't think there really needs to be more clarification from the teacher since she's already given quite a lot more detail than most teachers would before an exam. (I frequently had exams in school that were basically "This exam will be over everything in Unit 2.) And, I agree with seesom that you should back off. AP courses are for college credit and are meant to prepare students for college. You don't want to become the sort of parent who's showing up at a university to complain about grades (YES, I'VE HAD THAT). I get it, this is stressful for your kid! But...learning to deal with the fact that exams can be stressful is part of growing as a student. If anything, I would focus on doing some research on exam-taking skills and ways to reduce stress around exams and sharing those with your son rather than worrying about whether an exam is "fair" or "reasonable." Although this particular assignment sounds totally reasonable (and actually quite excellent!) to me, at some point in your life your kid will definitely encounter an assignment or exam or job situation that isn't totally fair and reasonable, and will still need to do it. So...coping skills are good.

rainbowbrite

The idea that the teacher wants to pre approve the thesis statements is a tad bit confusing in terms of total number of thesis statements required, and I would urge your son to ask his teacher for clarification. This is a perfectly reasonable question. In his future work and school life, he will be far better served by requesting clarification in this kind of situation rather than wasting time going down a rabbit hole of possibly unnecessary stress.

telepanda

It's not explained clearly...but just learning the "factual items" is probably all that's needed. Learn 10 facts about trading systems, and 5 facts about each of those belief systems and political development areas (10+12*5=70 facts total). That's it. Maybe learn one extra fact about each, in case you forget one. The "analytical statements" could be something like "(facts 1, 2, and 3) show that (something is true)". Practice thinking up a few of these if it's hard to do under pressure. The thesis statement could be something like "(Some big idea) is true because (analytical statements 1, 2, and 3)". Again, practice writing a few of these, but not every possible one. The idea is to know the facts and know how to organize an essay, but not to plan the whole argument ahead of time.

sninctown

I think another thing the teacher is trying to do is recreate the stressful environment and the randomness of the actual AP test. If your son gets used to preparing for this type of test, he will presumably do better or be more comfortable on the actual AP exam.

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