How can i improve my youtube video?

You sound rather bored with the whole thing. Try to inject more enthusiasm into what you say.

I've watched your video and you look like you have potential, but maybe invest into a Microphone & Camera to make your viewers get the best quality... Also maybe put some music in there too keep them listening: Try checking out this guy https://www.youtube.com/user/nigahiga. He does some vlogging & rant's but makes them fun & exciting; I hope you enjoy making them and good luck :D

Audio quality isn't amazing, but the content's quite good. You cut yourself off a bit early at the end, and honestly, I'm not sure if there's going to be an audience for this. Mainly because I can't imagine a lot of topics to stem from talking to yourself - no offence, it's just that vlogs are both hard to get an audience with, and don't really give viewers anything more than your life and opinion. I like it though. It's a good length. Good luck with channel, it will grow as long as you upload regularly. The rate of which will just depend on the content - not so much the quality. I mean, my slow internet can't handle 1080p after 21:00.