How do I convert a story idea into a full-fledged novel?
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Well I have an overall story (a medieval fiction) in mind which I believe is pretty interesting but to convert it into a full-fledged novel I have to tackle the following issues: 1) The overall story talks about the rise of, say, Character A, but there need to be more compelling sub-plots and twists or suspense to keep the reader hooked. How do I develop these or what are good guidelines/parameters to keep in mind to do so? 2) How do I learn how to describe geography, like done in fantasy novels, to describe physical terrain and features. I find it difficult to describe mountains and rivers and a map in general. 3) Describing physical attributes of characters. Some authors say this character has high cheekbones etc. I wouldn't recognize high cheekbones if it slapped me in my face. So how do i describe physical attributes of a character that I can picture in my mind? 4) War Strategies: How do I describe good medieval war strategies? Is it only by reading historical accounts of real battles? I would want to describe how a general makes use of the topography and overcomes superior odds a la Alexander. 5) Individual Battle Scenes: How do I describe the movements in a one-on-one battle? The parries, the blocks etc. I don't really know which is which and even If i learn I'm not sure how I can write extensive battle scenes with them. So any good ideas on writing such battle scenes? 6) Developing Interesting Characters: George R R Martin nails most of the above aspects including having a host of interesting characters such as Tyrion, Jon Snow, Cersei etc each having a distinct voice with interesting dialogues. Does this only come from the intuitive creativity of a good author or is there a traditional practice of developing characters? I guess this question comes across as being all over the place, but my objective is some enlightenment on each of the above topics or a pointer to a source which will help me better tackle each of the above topics.
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I am a writer, but not really a fiction writer. I think developing a coherent and interesting plot and compelling three-dimensional characters are difficult, so I won't address those parts of your question. Let me tackle the parts for which I think I can offer useful advice. Much of what you ask is about description. This something you can practice--and not just at your desk. Every time you go to a novel place or event, look around. Take in the details as if you planned to write about the experience in a letter to your mother, or for a friend who couldn't attend. If possible, take notes. Then go home and actually write the description. For the landscape problem, sit down in a park or other place away from cities. Bring a paper and pen/pencil instead of a computer, because you might want to sketch. Look over the landscape. What does your eye fall on first? Write it down. Describe it. Pay attention to details. Relate other aspects of the landscape to it, and go from there. Then comes the rewriting. Revise and revise and revise until the description will put what you saw into your reader's mind's eye. Eventually you will need to do this for images that are entirely imaginary. To describe people, be subjective. Think of a friend you know well, and describe his or her face. Think about what makes it unique. High cheekbones might not be important. Does he have a thin nose? Is her hair a deep shade of brown? Striking eyes? Focus on those elements that stand out for you. This will help you distinguish characters. As for the battle scenes, the first question to ask is, Are the details of the battle important? Why? Only talk about important details. (And it sounds like you need to do some serious research for this novel.) Remember, everything you include is there for a purpose. Each description, each element of each description, must help the story. It reveals character, or it moves the plot along, or it helps to put the reader more fully in the fictional world. If you have a fight between a big, strong, experienced soldier and an untrained opponent, the details of the fight aren't important if the soldier wins. "He quickly dispatched him with a blow to the torso." More words won't necessarily give the reader more useful information. But if the smaller man wins, then the details of the fight matter. How exactly does a small untrained man get the better of the more qualified opponent? The details will tell us about the character of the unexpected winner. You have a lot of work ahead of you. I wish you the best!
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Okay... When I started with my Epic Fantasy, some of these questions took up a lot of thought. But I'll try to answer all of them for you. 1) I found it useful to know where the whole story is going. Not only in the book I'm writing, but in the series as a whole. Then I keep the sub-plots centered around things leading up to the rest of the story. I did it while drafting, since I couldn't actually plan the story out. You can either do the same or plan, depending on how you write. 2) Sadly, this is done by practice. Either while writing your story, or by writing random descriptive passages of various landscapes until you feel comfortable with it. 3) Once again, practice. Use what you can see and describe. And lighten up about this. No one will ever see a character the same way as you do. No matter how hard you try. The point here is to give the reader enough to go on. Tall? Short? Hair color? Eye color? Anything else that stands out to you? EG: if a character's not white, let people know. If the person's a punk with an acid yellow mohawk, let us know, because if it comes up later without warning, it'll confuse your readers. Because by then, they will have drawn a conclusion on what the character looks like. 4) Reading about strategies can be good, if that's what you're focused on. If you're focusing more on the main characters, you have a bit more leeway. 5) Blow-by-blow battles can be very boring. Blocks and parries are the same, although blocks stop weapons in place, while parries deflect them. But there's no point to being technical to the point where your readers need to research martial arts in order to understand you. Description is your friend here. "I deflected his blow and dodged to the side before slashing at his head." Much more understandable. 6) A lot of people create characters, but I can't really tell you too much about it since my method is a bit more unorthodox. I never start writing before the character doesn't show up. When he/she does, I assume he/she is fully formed and write as if I'm discovering the character's complexities, motivation etc. with the reader. Makes for some awesome characterization. Hope this helps!
Misha Gericke
Obtain pencil. Obtain paper. Obtain chair. Attach rear parts to chair. Determine which end of pencil creates a black line on paper. Create lots of black lines. Revise. Repeat until you have something someone else wants to read. Everything is theory until you have something to revise. If you don't know what high cheekbones look like, then they are meaningless to your story. Write what you know and the story will tell you what you need to know more about.
Karen Tiede
I think there are many authors that start by writing a short story and then find that it grows to too many pages. That's one indication you need to develop it further as a novel. If you have written a short story, you already know about the character having a battle with a personal or societal villain and the blow up comes toward the end. A novel will often introduce the stages of the conflict over many chapters, so it can build in depth i.e. personal conflict, family conflict, societal conflict, environmental conflict, etc. It often introduces related subplots via additional characters that face a conflict. Two books that can be helpful are the Writer's Journey by Chris Vogler and 20 Master Plots by Ronald Tobias can offer a glimpse into elements of a novel that you should have including: A hero; stories without heroes leave the reader wondering whether they care about the characters. A villian; without a villian, there is no conflict so the story will be boring so make it complete Some other rules of the road I've learned: introduce all your characters by the first 1/3 don't introduce new conflicts in the latter pages, often it leaves the reader thinking there was no story so the author dumped in some exciting things at the end make your character discover something about themselves because of the conflict by the end of the 2/3 of the book the last 1/3 of the book is really more like a chapter or two that resolves open conflicts don't discover technology, artifacts, people, social groups etc. that save the day at the end
Sheri Fresonke Harper
To me it looks like you need to reframe your question: I think what you're really asking is "How do I learn to write compelling fiction?" No one is going to be able to give you a definitive answer for that. I adhere to the notion that writing cannot be taught, only learned. Your job as an apprentice novelist is to learn the tools and skills you need to allow your audience to willingly suspend their disbelief for as long as they are honoring you with their attention. One tool is research: you cannot effectively convey something about which you know little or nothing. One skill is self-editing: you must be able to evaluate what you've written as if the words belonged to someone else and revise accordingly. Also consider that novel-length may not be your forte. Perhaps you'll do better with short stories or novellas. Maybe you'd be more effective writing non-fiction. As you seem entranced by the visual aspects of story telling, maybe you should consider writing a screenplay. (The latter is cheating, in a way; you don't have to write a definitive action sequence, just indicate when in the script it takes place and let the director work it out with the help of her/his experts.) All writers are constantly striving to improve their craft. The attempt may take the form of classes, workshops, and/or self-study. There are thousands upon thousands of books on writing available. A few I would recommend are: Associated Press. Guide to News Writing Bradbury, Ray. Zen and the Art of Writing Browne & King. Self-editing for Fiction Writers Field, Syd. The Screenwriter's Workbook Knight, Damon. Creating Short Fiction Lyon, Elizabeth. The Sell-Your-Novel Toolkit Newman, Edwin. Edwin Newman on Language: Strictly Speaking/A Civil Tongue/Complete in One Volume Seger, Linda. Making a Good Script Great Stein, Sol. Stein on Writing Von Oech, Roger. A Kick in the Seat of the Pants: Using Your Explorer, Artist, Judge, and Warrior To Be More Creative (Hie thee to Amazon or another good bookstore and look them up; you should never discount the power of serendipity in research.) I just picked up but have not yet read Write Away: One Novelist's Approach to Fiction and the Writing Life by Elizabeth George. I admire her ability to sculpt language with a seeming ease that leaves me stumble-tongued. Surely this one tome will be the key I've always sought to clear out the cobwebs and procrastinations! (That's irony, by the way, and what I always say whenever I get any new book on writing.) There are two more things I would suggest. Read voraciously among those authors you admire and widely on all topics under the sun, and find a writing community (this isn't it) that will allow you the company of working writers of the type you would like to become. Tall order, I know, but remember, if you can be discouraged from writing, you were never meant to be a writer in the first place. And once you've learned from those who've gone before you, remember you have a sacred obligation to pay it forward. The student must at some point become the teacher, and in doing so once again become the student. Best of luck in your journey.
Nicole Ballard
A fellow by the name of Stephen Byers released a book this July that has been a huge help, Beginning Creative Writing: A Learning Experience, and might help you as well; the website is called Booksbybyers, and I believe he is also on facebook, hope it helps!
Addie Manuel
There are some insightful answers here already, but I would add: READ. It sounds like you already do read, but go re-read Game of Thrones and pay close attention to how he describes things. The more you read this stuff actively picking up on the details and how the prose is formed, the more easily you'll find the words coming to your mind as you write. You may not be an expert in medieval battle tactics, but that's something you can research and plot out on a map before tackling in writing. What you really need is the skill of composing meaningful prose. And the only way I know to get it is by reading good prose.
Scott Baird
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