What do you think of this 'November Crane' poem?
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Big, dark grey, crane. Grey clouds. Trees shroud-cloaked. Misted morning. North wind wings the crane to a bridge buffer...fender. Stilt-stands on wood. Ruffles feathers hunched ...show more
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Answer:
The feathers may be a bit ruffled, but they provide a lot of protection against the cold and wind (like goose down). If the crane were really that cold (or hungry), it would move.
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Let's hope the steel crane doesn't collapse.
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Vivid imagery. The crane is made to endure -- and so are we.
Elaine P...is for Poetry
Are you speaking the like of Sand Hill Cranes, if so they migrant to our area by the thousands each year, they are a sight to see at a state park, do their courting dance etc. before they head for warmer climate, people travel here from a 100 mile radius + to view them. Poor lone Crane you spy, needs a new road map. GM
jenny
In that one i`m shrouded in the mist. I have never seen a crane, other that the mechanicl variety
octogen
Heron, egrets, cats and people, all shivering. All the birds with feathers rufflled hoping for warmth...
C.S.Scotkin
The crane will rust! So I must give it a coat! The frame I will start,With a paint to stop rust!Perhaps the worker with the new warm coat will be a good bloke! And laugh at My joke! Very nice,I really enjoyed it! Nice work!
Dave
Your crane just gave my day a lift. Inanimate objects ooze life....birds perched on its arm. Power pole sentries Guarding our roads, linking arms Permanent Night Shift Birds on a wire A false move by one of them Could spark uprising Sorry I was thinking of a different crane - I wrote a children's poem once called "Jane, the Cross-eyed crane" it's fairly long but I will post it one day....(hedging my bets here)
*Jellz*
I could feel the chill and the wind. Very nice
spirit
Very good use of ambiguity; going back and forth between the two meanings of "crane"
David M
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