Please watch my youtube video of me singing can I sing?

Stop forcing it. The reason you're falling out of tune half the notes is because you're trying to force your low voice out the same way you would when using your upper register. You need to work on those runs, slowly, without the CD. If you can't do it slow, you can't do it fast. You're not hitting the actual notes you're supposed to, you're just sliding down and hoping you end on the right note. Each of those notes in those runs is it's own specific note. Hit it, no matter how quickly it passes by, you need hit it. You have a LOT of potential but you REALLY need to work on your intonation.

your great

This is blatant advertising and I wouldn't hold my breath waiting on an offer.

ur gud... but need more practise...

hell yeah! your gonna be on the next xfactor!

some good bits but more bad bits...sorry!!

u definitely have some talent there but still needs some practise.

I wouldn'tt bank on winning the X Factor if I was you.

For the record, yer voice is NATURALLY VERY powerful, so there's no need to force it the way you were doin', hon- that's the first point I'd like to make. My second point is watch yer tunin', as ya went a little bit flat on certain notes, (although not so much as what you'd notice!) All in all, I think you've got a beautiful voice and a lovely stage presence. Get yerself some singin' lessons, then think about goin' professional, 'cos I seriously think ya could do it, with the right trainin' and A LOT of bloody practice! Peace and love! Be lucky! :)