Can someone grade my SAT essay?

the essay is quite good. but i think u could work on it further more and if u add some more points it will get a lot more better :) anyways all the best for ur SAT whenever it is...hope u do well

I majored in English in college. Streetcar's main theme basically is that everyone is lying. Blanch is lying about being broke, her past, everything. Stanley rapes Blanche in the end and lies about it to Stella. Stella is lying to hereslf in order to beleive Stanley is a good husband. To answer the question posed to you, you should at least comment on the fact that without dishonesty, the book would not even exist, it's all about fallocies.

This is well-written. c: I give it a B+. You should state that sometimes it is appropriate to lie when -insert example here, like when you are protecting someone from harm-. That way, it seems better because you explained both sides, and it seems realistic. You can't not ever lie, right? ;D

5 a, which would be a C in gcse... if your in year 7, you are working at the average level. Strength - you can write a well opinionated creative argument, consisting of biased debated to stress the discussion. Target- develop techniques(add quotes etc)and try to add short sentences to show your serious about this argument and also use advanced puncuation (:) good luck :) x

It's really GOOD! but honestly I would give you around a 75%-78%. I'm only 13 and I've written better essays not saying yours is bad. It's just your not exceeding beyond for a level 4. You need more details, examples, better conclusion and into and more information backing up your essay. It's still REALLY great but more of a "B" and not an "A". xD

I am not so sure if it's legal. Just believe in yourself. Say you did okay. =)

-4 89.6%

not bad good ideas and thoughts but try to expand on your ideas you will get better marks trust me im a teacher:)

you failed