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How do I make my thesis statement more specific?

Can someone help me make this a better thesis statement?

  • The thesis statement I have come up with is "In spite of the fact that some people think that people can't generate their own happiness, people can actually generate their won happiness." I don't think this is a very good thesis, so can someone please help me to make it better.

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    In spite of the fact that some consider others of being incapable of generating their own happiness, everyone is perfectly capable of doing so.

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Even though most of society can not create their own happiness, it is not impossible Society has a hard time creating their own happiness but it is possible Don't use the word PEOPLE too much, its too generic and if you say society, you sound smarter

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