What is a great thesis statement about homework?

I need a good thesis statement?

• i had to make a goals letter for school, and my teacher said i need a thesis statement to refer back to the whole essay and that it should be somewhere in your introduction. here is my essay. Dear reader, as I get older I will begin to realize life is like driving on a road, you start off with a destination; which will be your goals to achieve in life. On your way to your destination you will come across speed bumps, speed bumps when you’re driving obviously mean that you have to slow down but still keep driving., but in reality as comparing to my life it means, that your still a kid, and slow your roll, you don’t have to grow up so quick you don’t want to lose your child innocence quite yet, but at the same time telling you to act mature. In 8th grade, I plan to achieve one academic goal, such as getting an 85 average or above in all of my classes. In order to do that I must become more organized, and pay more attention in class, get higher quiz & test grades. I must do my homework every night, and participate in class. One big factor of it is my testing grades, in order to make them higher than past years I must try to study 20 minutes a night and do my homework as well because homework is partially studying as well. I should also shut my phone off when Im study so I will not get distracted. This year I will also try to achieve one non-academic goal which would be try to make the school softball team. In order to achieve this goal, will need to practice 3 times a week for the next few months, I should also pay very close attention to my coaches and trainers and for sure, not slack. I should not give up so easily if I don’t get it right the first few times. I should also try to lose a few pounds every months so I could run faster, in order to do this I must exercise a few times a week, and eat healthy food. And when I am training, I must put in 110% effort. By following both my goals and achieving them, this will help me get into a good college if I keep the grades up in high school as well, and if I continue softball and do very well, I could possibly get some sort of scholarship. I don’t know what I want to do yet with my life as an adult, but I know in order to be successful in my future, I can’t mess up in school and have to do the mature adult like things on my way to being a an responsible adult.

• Answer:

  OK....The first paragraph you could inset this very nicely right after the last sentence....right after the word mature Thesis statement goals are essential to achievement, and if I want to raise my grades, try to get into college, and play softball, I will need to set realistic goals and have a good plan in place to achieve them. good luck..!