I have written a poem about a song, what do you think?

A sweet song, a soft song It knows my darkest secrets It knows the thoughts in my head It makes me safe, it makes me smile It takes me away from this world for a while A sweet song, a soft song This song sings my life to me with out lyrics This song makes me feel safe with out knowing I'm scared This song is happy for me with out it I am lost This song is my life story without knowing me A sweet song, a soft song I know I am not alone when I hear this song I know I will be okay when I hear this song I know I will see another day when I hear this song I know I am loved when I hear this song I know I can have the world when I hear this song I know I am part of the world when I hear this song
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I like it, its very simple. Not in a bad way though, i like it. you should check out mine.

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This song sings my life to me with out lyrics -i don't understand this part like it doesn't seem to fit to me but that may just be my own short comings but i like it, its balanced and concise and flows nicely it conveys a feeling though i think you may want to convey more feeling by closely inspecting your diction- why did you choose each word that you did- must it be that word or is another better- but be careful about your rhythm

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