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• I'm not a big writer but this idea came to me: basically a group of 9th graders hate upperclassmen so they make a club to wreak havoc on everyone. They seem nice until people get a little power hungry. You don't need to read all of it! :)     "Thanks for coming! Thank you, thank you." Even over her loud voice, Kelly couldn't tame the rowdy crowd of ninth graders.     "Your attention, please." Slowly, the group began to ease its way into peace.     "This day, the 28th of September, marks the first time ever T.I.S.C. has elected its Board. In just a few moments, our new President, Vice President, their Officers and our other Social Events Coordinator will be selected."     An applause made its way out of the sweaty hands of the anticipating students. They all wanted to be apart of the Teenaged Intermediate Social Clan's mysterious "Board".     "I'd like to make a point clear before we begin. All members, whether a part of the Executive Board or not, have one purpose: to ensure dominance among the school and thereby make our high school careers comfortable. Some people talk about being bullied and what not, and we can't have that just because we're on the bottom of the food chain. Some private school kids we go to school with are really snotty; we will not be their victims. Threatening people will be taken out.     "Anyway, you all know I have been selected as one of the Social Events Coordinator a week back. Hopefully, you will be as fortunate as I have been and be named a member of the Executive Board. Let's start by announcing our other Coordinator! Together, we will plan social events and make sure everything goes smoothly." Kelly felt self-conscious as her loud voice rang out through her basement.     Another round of applause. Kelly nervously ran over to the result/shoe box that read "Social Events Coordinator". She stuck her shaking hand in and read the name carefully.     "Interesting! Props to Logan and Derrick for counting the votes, by the way. This year's  second Coordinator is...Samantha Reilly! Congratulations! She received a whopping  60% of the votes!"     Sam's tall body erected as more clapping came. Her huge smile showed her perfect white teeth that seemed to shine. She timidly waved to her peers in thanks, and started for the seat which named her new title.     "Aww, thanks guys! I appreciate every vote I received. Kelly and I will try our best to give you guys a good time." She quickly sat cross legged with perfect posture.     Derrick yelled out, "Figures a blonde gets it!" The rest of the kids laughed. Sam was relieved that they could have humor about her victory, and most of her anxiety was lifted. Samantha was truly a sweet girl. She worked hard, but put as much effort into school as she did having fun. Her blonde hair is even real!     "Haha! I can tell this year will be a good one!" Kelly started once again with the help of note cards, "Now that we have our two Coordinators, the Officers will follow. Both of them are responsible for interpreting and enforcing the future rules that will be created by our President and Vice President. Additionally, they shall chose the punishment of rule breakers with the recommendation of the presidents. Let's see who will stand as our Executive Board Officers!"     Again, Kelly reached for the next shoe box that read "Officers". Her long fingers searched and out came two small slips of paper.     "They are...Logan O'Connel and Victor Crayfield! Nice job guys! We have confidence that you will set a good example for T.I.S.C.!"     Logan stood up. His dark brown hair bounced with his steps as he grinned coolly and whispered "thank you" to everyone. He sat down in his specified seat, accepting his applause, and denied to say any words. He has never been the talkative type, really. He's a simple guy, although he has an extreme kindness to him. Kelly knew he'd make a great Officer.     Shortly after, Victor stood up. He had to regroup—he seemed in shock as his name was called. Victor is fairly short for a freshman, but his muscles make up for it. He's obsessed with football and, frankly, not the brightest child. His girlfriend Kay had to shove him up from the leather couch for his win to set in.     When he reached his chair, he finally escaped his trance and a big smile flashed his big lips. "Thanks guys! Hope you didn't vote for me just 'cause my pecs," He said with a wink. Thankfully, his remark was directed at Kay. If not, Kay definitely would have made a scene with her quick speech. Kay's fierce attitude was slightly out of place in North-Eastern Pennsylvania.     "Now we have most of our Board. Except for, of course, the Presidents!" ...

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  I kind of got bored and stopped reading. I like your story idea but I would like for it to have a more interesting beginning. I really just wanna get on to the point ya know?