I'm writhing an Autobiography and would like sum tips?

• just so u no, i no my spellind is bad, and my gramer and so on, thats why im asking for help, please only "nice" help thanks MY AUTOBIOGRAPHY I guess the best way to start of is by telling you my name, Nathaniel William Hawley or sometimes by my mates Nat; I am 16 years old and was born on the 7th of September 1991 in Winchester hostiply, because of when I was born I am a year older then all of my mates in my year, which can not always be a good thing as I can do stuff before them, but have to wait so they can do it with me like surtan films, getting a job, car and so on, this leads me on to my school. I go to Quilley school of engineering in eastleigh I am in my last year (year 11) after 5 years at there, before then in when to churbord primary school for 5 years and Norwood primary school for 2 years. After secondary school I plan to go to college. I live at home with my mum and dad, Jayne and Adrean, I have no brothers or sisters which to my friends think is great but I’m not to sure on that, but what I lace in them I gain in pets with over 30 (not including fish) what I love dearly. I am now going to talk about what life means to me, I’m not to sure rely but if someone was to ask me is I’m happy or sad about my life so far, I would have to say happy even though there are sad times, there is a lot to be happy about, like a good family that loves me, great mates and much more. When it comes to friends I find it hard to make friends as I am HFA (high fusons aistic) and I do not have that many friends but the few I do have I would not trade for anything, I would raver have 1 best friend then 12 friends that don’t understand me or do not like me for who I am. Moving on to School, I do not practically enjoy in as most children do not, but I maneb to get throw the day keeping my head down and getting the work done also being dyslexic dose not help. If I was to say a subject that is my favorite, I would have to say art, even though I do not have it on my timetable. I did my GCSE a year early so I could do an other quolifurcasion, but lie what I have learnt life is not always so simple and I later dropped out of the over subject. Now you can find me at home every Thursday doing home work or revision. I feel because I get this day off I have managed to bump my grads up. What will the future hold for me I hear you ask, well after studying art at college for 2 or 3 years I wish to go on to higher educations and to art at Southampton univeraty. The year 2015 I hope to have a career in cartooning, make comics, animations a long these lines by this by I would like to have my own house still in England if possible. One day I would like to settle down with some one and later have chidden. How I should sum up my life from the year 1991 to the grand age I hope to live to, Well I would like people to be remembering me, as a happy person who made the best out of his life, was always true to his friends and was a loving husband and a brilliant dad. I believe in live there if not much more you could really wish for, sure you could have fame and fortune but would that make me happy? I don’t think so. Though my life story has rely only just started I rely hope it’s going to be a good one Nathaniel W Hawley

• Answer:

  I am hoping that I can offer something constructive here. 1. Use Spell Checker on your computer, when you misspell words it takes away from the point that you are trying to make. 2. Try to shorten you sentences. After you write a paragraph, go over it several times. Eliminate what is repeated or doesn't add to the point of the paragraph. 3. I understand you are a High Functioning Autistic person. If I were you I would find a good friend to help you with your sentence structure and spelling. You are obviously a young person with ambition, use the resources around you to help you with your writing. Some of the things you wrote were quite interesting but you didn't expand on them, such as your moving school and your personal struggle with academics. People like to read about overcoming adversity. Lastly, don't listen to people who only have negative things to say, if they cannot be constructive than they should be ignored. Keep on writing!